Who-classmate in my English class
What her name- Voice
What event- dumping garbage
What happened- the garbage can fell down stairs and that
classmate jumped out of the garbage can
What joke- voice and her classmate didn’t notice the classmate hide in the can
What she felt- worried
What the result- she thought that she had checked it maybe the accident won’t happen!
Topic sentence- Voice is a careless classmate.
Voice is a careless classmate. One of her interesting experiences took place when she was in high school. One day, voice with her classmates was cleaning the classroom. They were responsible for dumping garbage. But Voice didn’t know one of her classmates was playing hide and seek and just hid in the garbage can. She had not checked the garbage can and dumped it directly. On their way to dumping ground, Voice and her classmates felt the garbage can was unusually heavy. Therefore, they put down it and took a break at staircase. Suddenly, the garbage can fell down stairs and that classmate jumped out of it. They were scared that classmate fell down the stairs. Also, voice was worried that the classmate would get hurt. Fortunately, the classmate did not get hurt. Voice told me that if she had checked it maybe the accident won’t happen!
Saturday, May 17, 2008
Thursday, May 15, 2008
B9508025-Vita
Outline
Who- National University of Science and Technology classmate
What her name- Mia
what event- go to Na-Na ghost house
what happened- step on her shoes
wear the shoes
What joke- her shoes are lost.
She told the ghost to wait for a while
run away
How she felt-terrifying and exciting
what the result – she had a funny memory with friends in the life
Topic sentence=Mia was a daring classmate
Haunted House-Mia
Mia was a daring classmate. One day, She had an exciting experience went to the Na-Na haunted house with her friends, there was a terrifying place and had some people to play a ghost that shocked you. It was so exciting. Her friends were so nervous and then step on her shoes mindless, she told the ghost to wait for while and wear the shoes and run away. She had a funny memory with friends in the life.
She had courage more than others people and had brave to talk with ghost. It was impossible things, but she has done it
B9508035-Janet
Outline
Who-National Taiwan University of Science and Technology classmate
What her name-Olivia Chen
What she like-creative and a kind of ludic
What event-took picture
What happened-she and friends put out their tongues to take picture
What joke-their tongues touched each others’
What she felt-embarrassed and uncomfortableWhat the result-both of them yelled out and laughed
Topic sentence: Olivia is creative but a kind of ludic.
A horrible accident when taking pictures—Olivia
Olivia is creative but a kind of ludic. I knew her in National Taiwan University of Science and Technology. One day, on her way to attend a class, she and her friends wanted to take a picture suddenly. Therefore, they did it just right out of the classroom in International Building. In general, everybody usually puts a V or 5 or 7 pose with facial expressions when they are taking picture, but rather, they wanted something different. As a result, Olivia was creative to come up with a pose which was to put out their tongues when taking pictures.
Because they were not satisfied with the outcome, they tried it again and again. All of a sudden, I heard a loud voice made by Chili and Pepper. It’s really freak me out, I wondered about what happened. That’s because their tongues touched each others’. Both of them felt embarrassed, especially Pepper, because she is too sensitive. Eventually, they did not take a wonderful tongued-picture yet. They said they won’t do it anymore!
Who-National Taiwan University of Science and Technology classmate
What her name-Olivia Chen
What she like-creative and a kind of ludic
What event-took picture
What happened-she and friends put out their tongues to take picture
What joke-their tongues touched each others’
What she felt-embarrassed and uncomfortableWhat the result-both of them yelled out and laughed
Topic sentence: Olivia is creative but a kind of ludic.
A horrible accident when taking pictures—Olivia
Olivia is creative but a kind of ludic. I knew her in National Taiwan University of Science and Technology. One day, on her way to attend a class, she and her friends wanted to take a picture suddenly. Therefore, they did it just right out of the classroom in International Building. In general, everybody usually puts a V or 5 or 7 pose with facial expressions when they are taking picture, but rather, they wanted something different. As a result, Olivia was creative to come up with a pose which was to put out their tongues when taking pictures.
Because they were not satisfied with the outcome, they tried it again and again. All of a sudden, I heard a loud voice made by Chili and Pepper. It’s really freak me out, I wondered about what happened. That’s because their tongues touched each others’. Both of them felt embarrassed, especially Pepper, because she is too sensitive. Eventually, they did not take a wonderful tongued-picture yet. They said they won’t do it anymore!
b9508023-Mia
SHOPPING-VITA
OUTLINE
Who-College classmate in National Taiwan University Science and Technology
What her name-Vita
What she like-shopping and playing
What event-go shopping
What happened-chat with friends
kick the small stone
What joke-stumble
How she felt-embarrassing
What the result-continue chat with friends and shopping
Topic sentence-Vita likes go out with friends in the National Taiwan University Science and Technology
STORY
Vita likes go out with friends in the National Taiwan University Science and Technology. One day, she went to shopping in Shi Lin with her friends. They walked and said which is clothing good-looking at the same time. Vita didn't pay attention to the small stones, and then she was stumble. She was very embarrassing because many people in Shi Lin. She looked around and was afraid some people see she stumble by stones. She knew no people detect. She pretended nothing, and continued to chat with friends and shopping.
She knows many place have fun and buy something cheaper.
OUTLINE
Who-College classmate in National Taiwan University Science and Technology
What her name-Vita
What she like-shopping and playing
What event-go shopping
What happened-chat with friends
kick the small stone
What joke-stumble
How she felt-embarrassing
What the result-continue chat with friends and shopping
Topic sentence-Vita likes go out with friends in the National Taiwan University Science and Technology
STORY
Vita likes go out with friends in the National Taiwan University Science and Technology. One day, she went to shopping in Shi Lin with her friends. They walked and said which is clothing good-looking at the same time. Vita didn't pay attention to the small stones, and then she was stumble. She was very embarrassing because many people in Shi Lin. She looked around and was afraid some people see she stumble by stones. She knew no people detect. She pretended nothing, and continued to chat with friends and shopping.
She knows many place have fun and buy something cheaper.
Sunday, May 11, 2008
5/16 narrative writing presentation
In this writing assignment, you are asked to
1.Think of an interesting story of yours
2.Tell a story of the event to your partner.
3.Write down something about your classmate’s story from your partner.
4.Use 3nd person voice
5.Use past tense
6.Show the chronological order
In the presentation
On your slides, please show your outline, topic setnece=Subject+ main idea, supporting details
show the pictures and tell the story of your classmate to the class
A good sport –Irene
1.Think of an interesting story of yours
2.Tell a story of the event to your partner.
3.Write down something about your classmate’s story from your partner.
4.Use 3nd person voice
5.Use past tense
6.Show the chronological order
In the presentation
On your slides, please show your outline, topic setnece=Subject+ main idea, supporting details
show the pictures and tell the story of your classmate to the class
Who-Cypress College classmate
What her name-Irene
What she like-generous and outgoing a good sport
What event- got a new car
What happened- show her friend
Her friend played a joke on her
What joke- park the car in the lot
Put note
Scratch car
How she felt-shock
What the result – very shock, but fine
Get even with her friends
What her name-Irene
What she like-generous and outgoing a good sport
What event- got a new car
What happened- show her friend
Her friend played a joke on her
What joke- park the car in the lot
Put note
Scratch car
How she felt-shock
What the result – very shock, but fine
Get even with her friends
Topic sentence=Irene was a generous classmate and she was also a pretty good sport when we studied at Cypress College.
A good sport –Irene
Irene was a generous classmate and she was also a pretty good sport when we studied at Cypress College. She is that kind of girl who is able to take a joke without getting hurt or insulted. One day, her father bought her a new car and she was very excited. She invited a couple of friends out to show her friends and celebrate. So when they got to the restaurant, they told Irene to park in the lot instead of on the street. The car would be safer there. They warmed her about how it is with a new car on the street since all of them really didn’t want anything to happen to it. 
After they finished dinner, and when they got to the care, there’s this note from some woman apologizing for scratching her car.
She couldn’t believe it, so she started walking around the car looking for the damage, but she can’t see anything wrong. Her friends all start cracking up. It turns out they had left the note on the car as a joke. It was all made up. She felt dumb. But no harm don. Once she got over the shock, she was fine. She said she’ll get even with those guys some day.
After they finished dinner, and when they got to the care, there’s this note from some woman apologizing for scratching her car.She couldn’t believe it, so she started walking around the car looking for the damage, but she can’t see anything wrong. Her friends all start cracking up. It turns out they had left the note on the car as a joke. It was all made up. She felt dumb. But no harm don. Once she got over the shock, she was fine. She said she’ll get even with those guys some day.
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