Saturday, May 17, 2008

B950827 - Marcus

Who-classmate in my English class
What her name- Voice
What event- dumping garbage
What happened- the garbage can fell down stairs and that
classmate jumped out of the garbage can
What joke- voice and her classmate didn’t notice the classmate hide in the can
What she felt- worried
What the result- she thought that she had checked it maybe the accident won’t happen!
Topic sentence- Voice is a careless classmate.

Voice is a careless classmate. One of her interesting experiences took place when she was in high school. One day, voice with her classmates was cleaning the classroom. They were responsible for dumping garbage. But Voice didn’t know one of her classmates was playing hide and seek and just hid in the garbage can. She had not checked the garbage can and dumped it directly. On their way to dumping ground, Voice and her classmates felt the garbage can was unusually heavy. Therefore, they put down it and took a break at staircase. Suddenly, the garbage can fell down stairs and that classmate jumped out of it. They were scared that classmate fell down the stairs. Also, voice was worried that the classmate would get hurt. Fortunately, the classmate did not get hurt. Voice told me that if she had checked it maybe the accident won’t happen!

1 comment:

NTUST BA 2008 Reading and Writing said...

Hello,I'm Nick.
Your story is funny and I'm impress of it.The story is luminous
that you wrote.It will be a good sample for me.I think that I also can write the good content.Thank you for your sample.