Who-National Taiwan University of Science and Technology classmate
What her name-Olivia Chen
What she like-creative and a kind of ludic
What event-took picture
What happened-she and friends put out their tongues to take picture
What joke-their tongues touched each others’
What she felt-embarrassed and uncomfortableWhat the result-both of them yelled out and laughed
Topic sentence: Olivia is creative but a kind of ludic.
A horrible accident when taking pictures—Olivia
Olivia is creative but a kind of ludic. I knew her in National Taiwan University of Science and Technology. One day, on her way to attend a class, she and her friends wanted to take a picture suddenly. Therefore, they did it just right out of the classroom in International Building. In general, everybody usually puts a V or 5 or 7 pose with facial expressions when they are taking picture, but rather, they wanted something different. As a result, Olivia was creative to come up with a pose which was to put out their tongues when taking pictures.
Because they were not satisfied with the outcome, they tried it again and again. All of a sudden, I heard a loud voice made by Chili and Pepper. It’s really freak me out, I wondered about what happened. That’s because their tongues touched each others’. Both of them felt embarrassed, especially Pepper, because she is too sensitive. Eventually, they did not take a wonderful tongued-picture yet. They said they won’t do it anymore!
1 comment:
Hello, I'm Tina.
Your story is very impressive to me.
That pose is so cool, but I will never try it.
And I think that you used too much the word "because" in the last part.
You can change it by the other words.
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