Wednesday, May 21, 2008

B9508037-Samantha




Unexpected Justice

Who- my classmate
What her name- Mico
What she like- a sense of justice
What event- took a hot spring in Beiton
What happened- saw her friend's boyfriend and a lovely girl
walking so close、scolded him angrily、
called her friend
What joke- miscalculated her friend's boyfriend
How she felt- embarrassed, shock
What the result- very embarrassed, but congratulated herself on miscalculate

Topic Sentence
= Mico is my classmate who has a sense of justice and with a great enthusiasm
to help her friends.

Story
Mico is my classmate who has a sense of justice and with a great enthusiasm to help her friends. In this winter vacation, she and her family took a hot spring in Beiton. Then the incredible picture shocked her. There seems to seeing his friend, Tina, whose boyfriend and a lovely girl walking so close. She felt quite angry. Later she rushed to them and scolded them angrily. They looked like stupefied and just stood there.
Afterward she called Tina to explain what her seeing. The voice appeared from this call, “Honey, it's about time to go.” It was really her boyfriend's voice. She didn't believe it's a miscalculation and apologize to them without stopping. She felt very embarrassed. However, she congratulated herself on mistake, because Tina and her boyfriend were still getting along.


1 comment:

NTUST BA 2008 Reading and Writing said...

Hello, I'm Annie. I think it's so embarrasing to Mico, but I like Mico's justice and forthright. I want a good friend like her. SO it was fine.