Tuesday, May 20, 2008

B9508031 Voice

Who-College classmate in National Taiwan University

Science and Technology

What his name-Marcus

What he like-ridding bicycle

What event-ridding bike
What happened-go to a trip with friends
What joke-threw down
How he felt-he can
t believe
What the result-ridding bike and closing his eyes

topic sentence- Marcus was a funny and comical boy

Marcus was a funny and comical boy when we studied at National Taiwan University of Science and Technology. Last summer vacation, he went to Hualien with his two Friends.

They rent bicycle and ridding along the farmland path. Marcus rode slowly. Because he enjoyed the beautiful view and fresh air. He closing his eyes and felt the breezy blow his body. His friends talk to each other. They didnt notice Marcus. When them look back. Marcus was disappear. They rode back and looked for Marcus. After a while, They hear small sound from farmland. Marcus fell into the farmland. His
friends handed him and asked him why he threw down. Marcus didn
t know how does it happen. He cant believe.
He said: I closing my eyes, when open eye I lying the farmland.

1 comment:

NTUST BA 2008 Reading and Writing said...

Hello Voice, I am Ming. This story is very interesting but you make some mistakes in the pass tense.