Who-GingerWhat event-go to Cing-Jing farm
With who-her boyfriend, co-workers
What happen-chased by sheep
How she felt-scared
What the result-run away
What joke-regard a dog as a sheep
Topic Sentence: Ginger was a naive girl and had good-tempered
Ginger was a naive girl with good-tempered person. Her boyfriend, co-workers and she went to Cing-Jing farm last summer vacation. The weather was fine. The blue sky with white cloud and the sunshine made they feel so comfortable. In the farm they saw a flock of sheep and cows everywhere. Her boyfriend asked her a question when they enjoyed the scenery. Her boyfriend said:”Ginger, can you see a black mark in that mountain?”, “It seems like a black sheep, right?” And Ginger said:” Oh yes, it’s so special. Just have one black sheep.” Her boyfriend said:”How silly you are. It is a sheep-dog not a black sheep.”
Ginger was a naive girl with good-tempered person. Her boyfriend, co-workers and she went to Cing-Jing farm last summer vacation. The weather was fine. The blue sky with white cloud and the sunshine made they feel so comfortable. In the farm they saw a flock of sheep and cows everywhere. Her boyfriend asked her a question when they enjoyed the scenery. Her boyfriend said:”Ginger, can you see a black mark in that mountain?”, “It seems like a black sheep, right?” And Ginger said:” Oh yes, it’s so special. Just have one black sheep.” Her boyfriend said:”How silly you are. It is a sheep-dog not a black sheep.”
After that, her boyfriend wanted to play a joke on her again. He knew that she was afraid of animals so he left food step by step in order to attract sheep. It was so successful. A group of sheep chased after their bottoms. Ginger was scared and ran away as fast as possible. Even though, her boyfriend made fun on her. She wasn’t mad at him. They still had a good time there.
1 comment:
I'm Emily, I was impressed of your story. You wrote a good topic sentence which connecting with your content. You made the story lively by using some of reality conversations. And it is really a fun one. Moreover, you wrote the incident in chronological order, making me fall into the dream step by step. Just as what teacher said in class that you used simple words but making people clearly know what you were writing about. This is really a good sample for me. I’ll write the article by following your advantages.
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