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• Topic sentence :the president accede case approve Chen, Shi-Shuenn to be the next president of NTUST
• Who :President Chen, Shi-Shuenn
• When :may,2008
• Where : National Taiwan University of Science and Technology
• What's happen :hold the meeting
• What's the result : most of the delegates agree Chen, Shi-Shuenn to be the next president of NTUST
Chen, Shi-Shuenn was approved to be the next president of NTUST
The National Taiwan University of Science and Technology (NTUST), had held a meeting few days ago, discussing about the president accede case.
According to the rule of university organization, it should have over two-third(2/3) of university delegates attended the meeting and must have over half(1/2) of delegates agree so that the sitting president can be the next president. There are 93% of NTUST’s delegates attended the meeting and more 86% of them voting to Chen, Shi-Shuenn. They support President Chen keep on leading NTUST to be an outstanding and international university.
Chen, Shi-Shuenn is the professor of Construction Engineering, he had acceded the president since 1994.he communicated with teachers, students and schoolfellows constantly so most of the delegates supported him. On the meeting, president Chen point out that NTUST is one of the university can get the “fifty thousands million 5 years” by the government. At the past 3 years, because of the breakthrough, NTUST had been build the multiple value, the International Building had been increase 4 floors and the Education Research Building, the Architectural (Building) Centre, the International Exchange Centre will be finished on next year; on the other hand, president Chen also plan to employ 100 professors, 100 doctor researchers and recruit more outstanding international postgraduate student.
President Chen hope NTUST can be innovated continuously, to bring up the science and technology manage talent who have global competitiveness, and he also hope NTUST can be the top international university on the future.
• Topic sentence :the president accede case approve Chen, Shi-Shuenn to be the next president of NTUST
• Who :President Chen, Shi-Shuenn
• When :may,2008
• Where : National Taiwan University of Science and Technology
• What's happen :hold the meeting
• What's the result : most of the delegates agree Chen, Shi-Shuenn to be the next president of NTUST
Chen, Shi-Shuenn was approved to be the next president of NTUST
The National Taiwan University of Science and Technology (NTUST), had held a meeting few days ago, discussing about the president accede case.
According to the rule of university organization, it should have over two-third(2/3) of university delegates attended the meeting and must have over half(1/2) of delegates agree so that the sitting president can be the next president. There are 93% of NTUST’s delegates attended the meeting and more 86% of them voting to Chen, Shi-Shuenn. They support President Chen keep on leading NTUST to be an outstanding and international university.
Chen, Shi-Shuenn is the professor of Construction Engineering, he had acceded the president since 1994.he communicated with teachers, students and schoolfellows constantly so most of the delegates supported him. On the meeting, president Chen point out that NTUST is one of the university can get the “fifty thousands million 5 years” by the government. At the past 3 years, because of the breakthrough, NTUST had been build the multiple value, the International Building had been increase 4 floors and the Education Research Building, the Architectural (Building) Centre, the International Exchange Centre will be finished on next year; on the other hand, president Chen also plan to employ 100 professors, 100 doctor researchers and recruit more outstanding international postgraduate student.
President Chen hope NTUST can be innovated continuously, to bring up the science and technology manage talent who have global competitiveness, and he also hope NTUST can be the top international university on the future.
2 comments:
Hello, Heidi:
I found out that you have some grammar and word mistakes. For example, I suggest you can change “it should have over two-third (2/3) of university delegates attended the meeting” into “it should be over two-third (2/3) of university delegates attending the meeting”. For another example, “at the past 3 years” should be “in the past 3 years”. Besides, the tense in the article is not coherent. You may pay attention to these problems.
Sorry, I forgot to write my name. I'm An-Shun.
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